Monday 14 April 2014

This is my favourite piece of writing in term 1

“Hey max" lets play some rugby. Ok said max. Hey  Te mana, arepa, genero, dain  do you want to play. Ok we will play. Hey little boy give my ball back it's mine. Ok  here you go. Hey
Can I play said the little boy. I'm not sore because we are playing takle and you might get hert.
But next time we play tuch you can play. Ok said the little boy. The next morning I was playing tuch rugby. The same people wore playing and the little boy asked to play. So I said ok hoos team do you want to be on. He said my team. Lucky he was on my team because he was furst.
And that rugby game went to us! We one. Thanks to the little boy.

1 comment:

  1. Great story Dallas, Don't forget capital letters for the names of people. from Mum

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